The Ned Bus E-Portfolio & Help If You Need It

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Twitter Beat

This is a project that Viola Lasmana, Al Harahap and I came up with. For our SF Renaissance project we decided to use Twitter as our new media put to pedagogical use.

Why Twitter?

Interaction and conversations among students in the classroom:

• Provides a dynamic, easy-to-follow feed for students in the classroom
• Students can easily view and interact with other students in the classroom
• Students can easily reply to or re-tweet their classmates’ tweets

Student work made public:

• Dialogues are taken beyond the classroom: anyone can see the tweets
• Students become aware of the publicness of their work
• Students become more responsible over the work they produce and put out there
• Possibilities for knowledge creation is expanded as students are able to "follow" and read other Twitter users' tweets that are related to the SF Renaissance, etc. For instance, students are able to have dialogues with students from other universities who may be tweeting about the SF Renaissance as well

Users can provide links to pictures, videos, websites, etc. on a tweet.

Twitter can be used throughout the semester as a platform for students to publish their work in. For instance, students are encouraged to post tweets about their latest class blog, essay, etc., so that their work is more visible and invite more interactions, and more importantly, Twitter's interface provides a more accessible platform for students to be able to see one another's works. Rather than using RSS feeds which can get tedious, Twitter is used as both feeds to student work, as well as to produce information about specific topics.

The use of Twitter encourages more production of media and knowledge in and out of the classroom.

How:

For a class the size of our seminar, with 15-20 students, we would have each student create their own twitter account and have all the students "follow" one another via their accounts. During the unit, the students would be required to search for artifacts or resources that relate to the SF Renaissance and to "tweet" about them. This would take the conversation out of the classroom and would get the students dialoguing with one another through twitter about the unit subject. Individual students would be assigned particular topics relating to the SF Renaissance (i.e. drugs & literature, poetry readings, the 1950s, etc.).

The key step in the fruition of the entire project would be that the students would discuss the "tweeted" artifacts in class, decide what has reliability, value, worth, etc. and the agreed upon "tweets" would be added to a class twitter account solely created to "TweeT" about the topic of SF Renaissance. This would be an account where those across the globe interested in the beats, would be able to follow the account to get valuable information, articles, artifacts, etc., (and most ideally from a class being taught in San Francisco). This particular account would also be available for additions by future classes. The future classes would be able to learn from the work produced and to add their own. This "research" and analysis of the
artifacts brought in would give the students the much needed practice to understand what information online has validity, value, reliability, etc.

If the class were taught here in SF, it would be an added benefit to have certain students, with the capability, to post "location tweets". This way, there would be actually "tweets" that would reference particular locations in the city (relating this twitter project to our work on mapping the SF Renaissance in the city)."

Concerns to consider:

• For a larger class, the same process of setting up separate topics within the context of the beats would apply, but to groups rather than individuals. The groups would then come together in class to discuss their themes separately and report to the class together.
  

• Having 60 plus students "tweeting" would be a little much to consume for the each individual student and the teacher, so the students would do research together as groups and bring their suggested artifacts into class to present. The same final step would apply here, where the decided upon artifacts would be posted to the SF Renaissance Twitter account.

• This study brings up a couple of concerns:
• 65% of tweets are still tweeted from a desktop browser, so only 35% are from mobile applications. We need to find out how many students in the class really would have constant access to the tweets. If not everyone does, do we still go ahead with the assignment? If so, is there some way to limit the tweeting of those with mobile capabilities so that those without do not feel left out from the constant exchange of information? What are the ethical-pedagogical implications of having only some of the class with instantaneous access to the tweets, while others only certain times during the day?
  
• 60% of tweeters quit within the first month. Short of the forceful requirement that students mustparticipate in the tweeting, what preparation can we do as a class to make them see the value of Twitter and tweeting as learning tools?

• For students outside of the Bay Area and New York City Area, are there geolocation exercise alternatives that could incorporate their own local/regional literary spatial-rhetorical histories?
• Would doing so veer off into a literary period/movement other than the San Francisco Renaissance? Perhaps this would be fine as a gesture towards going into the next unit of the class, if the idea is for the same kind of new media exercise to be just as engaging for students in the rest of the country (and world).

Teaching Glog

What depths of perception can the student get to in relation to the main character's reality? What alternate or further in-depth perspectives on the concept of "uplift" can the student maintain? What creative ways can they communicate what it might have been like to live in the world of Nexus/black higher education?

Some of the skills needed to bridge this connection:

• creative engagement/imagination with the Glog and its artifacts
• close reading capabilities
• ability to draw connections between concepts within a single context (in other words, working with the glog by uncovering what its artifacts represent and drawing connections between the representations within the context of the concept of "uplift")
• ability to get creative with their own understanding of the text - to be able to not only understand and explain what the text might be trying to argue in regards to "uplift," but also to be able to work away from this understanding to expand to alternate possible perspectives

Students will communicate their understanding of the text by working with it creatively. Their goal will be to tackle a new perspective, from the experience of a character of their own creation, who is living in the same reality as Helga Crane. They will need to connect the artifacts of the glog through this imaginary character AND to represent an alternate perspective from Helga Crane's, a perspective that coherently reflects the reality of Nexus.

Assignment:

Your goal is to tackle a new perspective, one captured through the experience of a character of your own creation, who is living in the same reality as Helga Crane. Take a look at the glog on the theme of "Nexus/uplift". You will need to connect these artifacts on the glog through your imaginary character AND to represent an alternate perspective from Helga Crane's, a perspective that coherently reflects the reality of Nexus. Keep some of the following bullet points in mind as you work on your piece.

• What do these glog artifacts have to do with one another, if anything?
• How do these artifacts relate to Quicksand?
• How do these artifacts relate to Helga Crane and her perspective on Nexus?
• In what ways might your character's perspective relate to these artifacts?
• In what ways will this character's perspective differ from Helga Crane's? Why?
• What might your character's view be of Helga Crane?

Make sure you complete at least two pages of writing from your character's perspective and keep in mind - you're not telling your own story here. Your specifically dropping your character into the world of Helga Crane, the world of Nexus, and capturing your character's thoughts on Nexus, uplift and the artifacts on the glog. Your character is to be used as a connector to all of these concepts and ideas.

The Harlem Renaissance in 3 minutes 12 seconds...

The Ned Bus Youtube Video on the Harlem Renaissance

Whitman's "Leaves of Grass" and Authority ::: The Set-Up/Writing Assignment

For the design/framing of the following assignment click here.

The SET-UP

Now that we've read the poem, discussed the theme of authority, including looking at the cultural artifacts related to the New York police during the time, pull specific excerpts from the poem that you feel reference authority. What sections of the poem, short or long, speak most strongly to you regarding the theme of authority? This can be something as overt as a section including the word police (for example, "the policeman travels his beat..."), or perhaps something a little more hidden in the text (for example, "Patriarchs sit at supper with sons and grandsons and great grandsons around them..."). Take some chances with the poem. Try to find some excerpts that might be difficult to connect to authority. Experiment with the excerpts by writing a few ideas down as to why your excerpt connects to authority. Be prepared to share these ideas in class. Once we share some of these as a group, take some time to free-write on how your excerpt speaks to authority during the time the poem was written, discuss how it relates to authority in your own lives, and how "authority" works in relation to other themes of the poem we've brought up in class (for example, community, individualism, etc).

When this is complete, we'll spend some time sharing the ideas you've come up with in your writing. Walk around the room and share at least 3 ideas that came up for you with other students. Then, we'll reconvene and each of you will share an idea that stuck with you from your conversations. For this discussion, you'll want to share the ideas of your fellow students, not your own.

The WRITING ASSIGNMENT

Working from your class writing and discussion, research some of your own artifacts of Whitman's time that relate to authority. Specifically, search the Library of Congress' website for photos of policeman in or around 1855, when Whitman published his first version of "Leaves of Grass." Spend some time doing a "close-reading" of your photo. What do you notice about the photo? Make a list. Describe the photo. Describe your relationship to the photo. How does it make you feel? How do you relate to the photo in terms of our focus theme of "authority"? What about your notions of police now - how does the photo relate to that? Now, on your blog, write your own 600-700 word poem in response to the artifact, this photo, the theme of authority - write in relation to Whitman's notions of authority in his poem and your own experience of authority. I encourage you to play with the words, ideas, craft of Whitman's poem, and use his poem as a starting point to craft your own work. What will your poem say about your experience of authority? What similarities will your poem share with Whitman's - in both form and meaning? This poem should be a minimum of 2 pages, double spaced. Remember to use references to Whitman's use of authority in the poem and references to your photo artifact and its representation of authority.

In addition, spend another 2 pages (600-700 words, double-spaced) writing on how your poem is similar or different to Whitman's. In what ways is your theme of authority similar or dissimilar to the theme of authority in Whitman's work? Could your poem work in the context of Whitman's time and, if so, how? What does your poem say about the theme community? individualism? freedom?

a writing/engagement assignment with Whitman's "Leaves of Grass" and the topic of authority

a writing/engagement assignment with Whitman's "Leaves of Grass" and the topic of authority

I. Results
A. Primary goal: What do you want the students to understand more fully about "Song of Myself"? Why is this topic important to Whitman? How does this topic connect to other themes or concerns of the poem? How might this topic or question engage students' interest and/or experience? How does this topic or question relate to broader issues in literature? How does it relate to broader cultural or social issues?

• How does Whitman handle authority in his poem?
• How does authority relate to other themes (individuality, expression, creativity, etc.) of the poem?
• Knowing the history of authority figures (our example: the police) during Whitman's time, how does Whitman use his poetry to contain, capture, express his perspective on this topic?

B. Secondary goals: what do you want students to understand about reading poetry? about how to write about poetry? about how to connect text and context?

• How does Whitman's poem relate to your understanding of authority in your own lives? Does Whitman's poem express some of your own feelings on authority, and, if so, how?
• How does the text change in relation to the context of your life as opposed to how it works in the context of when it was written?
• How does this poem and Whitman's perspective on authority fit into the genre of romantic poetry? If it doesn't, why and how doesn't it?

II. Evidence of learning: How will students demonstrate that they are answering the question? What will your evidence of student learning look like?
A. Types of writing/evidence:

1. free-writing
2. blog-posting
3. creative writing
4. artifact uncovering
5. in-class discussion

B. How will this show you that they've learned? How will you evaluate its success or failure in relation to your goals?

1. By connecting the original excerpts, through the free-writing and in-class discussion, to the final work with artifacts and poetry writing, those concrete through-lines will emerge identifying what insights the students have gained from their work.
2. Moving backwards to my original goals, the questions listed above in section one, it should be clear as to whether the students work provides the expected answers.

III. Design

A. what knowledge or skills will students need in order to produce their evidence of student learning? knowledge about the poem; cultural or historical knowledge; knowledge about Whitman? skills in reading? skills in analysis/making connections? skills in writing?

1. knowledge about the cultural artifacts
2. knowledge about romantics
3. close-reading for themes (authority)
4. summarizing and critiquing poetry & their own work

B. what kind of activities will develop these knowledges and skills? what kinds of things will students need to do to acquire these knowledges and skills?

1. See above: Section 2-A.
2. These are the skills we're working on together - they'll need to involve themselves in the assignment and in so doing acquire these skills.

C. How will you structure these activities? do some have to come before others? which? why? are some more or less important than others? are some more or less formal than others?

1. The students will be asked to read the poem at home, and come into class prepared
2. The students will pull specific excerpts from the poem that they feel reference authority and bring them to class. Once we share some of these as a group, they'll spend time free-writing on the topic - the directions for the free-write will ask the students to explain how their excerpt speaks to authority during the time, how it relates to authority in their lives, how it works in relation to other themes of the poem that we've brought up in class, etc.
3. Following this, they'll spend some time sharing their ideas with one another in class, mingling around the room, with the expectation that they'll need to share ideas they glean from other students with the rest of the class.
4. At home, the students will be required to find some of their own artifacts of Whitman's time that relate to authority. On their blog, they'll be required to 1) explain how their artifact relates to authority and 2) write their own 200 word poem in response to their artifact and the theme of authority.
5. After a class period on the genre of romantic poetry, as an additional activity the students will need to find other romantic poetry that deals with the notion of authority, and bring them to class to have another free-write and in-class discussion session.
6. In class they will write an essay about their poem arguing why or why not it falls under the category of romantic poetry.

"the policeman travels his beat..."

Based on Whitman's several references to the police force in "Leaves of Grass," I thought it might be interesting to research the world of the NYPD in and around 1850. I came across a lot of interesting information, photos, history, etc, in and outside of the Whitman archive.

It's hard to know exactly where Whitman stood in regards to the New York police, which were newly organized only years before the 1855 version of "Leaves of Grass" was published. Horace L. Traubel, a friend of Whitman's, in his interviews with the poet during the last years of his life, quoted Whitman as saying, "The marriage bond and police law forever!" (see the volume in its entirety here). To contrast this, in her chapter on Whitman in From Fact to Fiction, Shelley Fisher Fishkin states that he "deplored" the police's treatment of "prostitutes and the children of the poor" (see whole article here). These quotes and comments representing Whitman's perspective leave much to be desired, but constructing a pseudo reality of what the New York police might have existed as during Whitman's time might help us start to shed light on how Whitman might have regarded the organization. Of course, the information provided below is only attempting to do just that - to "start" piecing together this reality by using resources and artifacts found on the internet.

Interesting facts: In 1845 the official New York Police Department was established. Shortly afterwards, in the 1850s, the first multi-shot pistol, introduced by Samuel Colt, goes into mass production. The weapon is adopted by the Texas Rangers and, thereafter, by police departments nationwide. This would have transformed the notion of power for the police during the time, and Whitman would most certainly have been present to this development (not to mention all of the other history referenced below). It's amazing to think that these numbers, facts and bits of information made up the world of "the police" for Whitman. When he comments on the police in his work this is the frame of reference from which he undoubtedly pulled.

Fascinating arrest statistics from the first organization of the police department between 1845-1850 - This particular page is just a small section, one page of an entire website dedicated to the long and detailed history of the NYPD. The amount of information here is virtually endless and overwhelming. Here we have access to facts/statistics as artifacts.

A letter to Walt Whitman from his brother Thomas Jefferson Whitman which briefly mentions the importance of the New York police in keeping the city safe (there's a note at the bottom of the page describing the incident to which Thomas refers - the 1863 Draft Riots).

In doing the necessary online research for different projects in this class, I've come across the Google "timeline" website several times, which lays down a timeline for your topic by providing links that contain information about the important events and when they occured. Up until now I experienced this Google tool as no more than an interesting trick, but, in the context of building a world around Whitman and his poem, it has emerged as a helpful web-tool to piecing those years together online. Click here to see the timeline for the NYPD from 1840-1858.

Finally, below are some photos of the New York police taken at famous locations in the city, including Central Park and Broadway, between 1850 and 1910.

The Walt Whitman Questions

How does Walt Whitman preserve or represent the importance of the individual in the context of recognizing unity and the community in "Song of Myself"?

When answering this question it can be useful, on a surface level of analysis, to compile the diction statistics of Whitman's poem. In so doing, specifically by using the option in TokenX, a student could create a word cloud that can stand

alone as a transformation of Whitman's work. Try reading the word cloud to the left. I imagine Whitman would have reveled in this type of technological wordplay with his work, bringing a whole other type of "re-writing" of his poem into possibility. By removing Whitman as the author and allowing the student (or arguably the computer - but that option will remain for another type of "big question") to rewrite the poem, not only does this type of transformation of Whitman's writing change the idea of the "I" who is writing and narrating the poem, but this particular rewriting let's us see how the words Whitman used give us insight into how the poem innately focuses on individuality. This is measured by noting the most used words in the top 100 words used in the piece. 4 out of 5 of the top five most often used words are versions of the self as individual and the remaining word in the 5 references the other as individual. By rearranging the words as shown below, ordering them

from most to least used, again, we not only rewrite the poem (try reading this version of the poem and see what comes up - there are some interesting connections), but we also generate more focus on the groupings of the word usage. Here we create a more visual connection between the types of words used, how often they're used, and a more organized experience for the reader. Whitman would have been excited to see how easily a computer could do some of the work he tried to do on his own, while rearranging, rewriting, transforming and recreating his work over his lifetime. Pairing the word cloud with a published excerpt from a Whitman poem edited by Whitman himself, we can perhaps see the connection between the changing individual and the changing expression of that individual. The poem has had its life put at stake, "to be lost at any moment." As Whitman changes, the poem changes, and, finally, with Whitman having passed on, the poem is allowed to be expressed in whatever way the new individual, the new poet of the poem, finds necessary. This history of the poem in itself is an expression of the individual and the individual's greater connection to community. i you me he - all his. you get me?

A Few Archives

Naropa Poetics Audio Archives: http://www.archive.org/details/naropa

• text-based
• invites explorers interested in beats, but you need to know what about the beats you're looking for
• easy searching w/advanced search option
• no guiding through the collection
• primary materials include brief summary with multiple download formats depending on the file

The Kenneth Rexroth Archive: http://www.bopsecrets.org/rexroth/index.htm

• text-based
• fairly focused archive topic, so all you need to do is read
• searching is not easy, but the archive is also not huge
• no guiding through the collection
• primary materials presented in basic format/not a lot of manipulation allowed/very basic webby in general

The Internet Archive, a non-profit digital library (includes access to multiple types of archives, from downloadable live music to radio programs, and, of course, the literary focused): http://www.archive.org/index.php

• text/image-based
• invites people who might have been looking for one thing and end up finding a whole lot more
• searching is not easy, but the archive and the archive is huge, so know what you're looking for and know how to spell it
• great guiding... posting multiple options, associated files, etc.
• primary materials presented in fairly advanced format/you can play files before you download them/a lot of download options

The Backward Design Experience

This is something I'd like to talk more about in class. I know checking in with other students' blogs helps, but I feel incomplete on how to connect the "design" of the class to the work we completed on the "assessment" and "results" end of the process. I would not only like to see what other students have to say, along with the professor, but I'm interested in moving past these concerns together to make sure we really are all clear on what we produced together and individually. Does my particular "design" really address or produce answers to the questions we established for "assessment" and "results"? Is it possible my "design" is really just posing as a backward design element, when in fact it's really just a the result of my persistent forward design thinking? I'm not sure if the connection made between the "assessment" and "results" and my "design" is strong enough to deny a "yes" to the question. Also, why do the bullet lists for Professor Hanley's "assessment" and "results" not directly correspond to the text on backward design? I am sure I'm missing that part of the conversation. All this being said, and this may be a result of my failure to understand the assignment, but creating my "design" portion of the process was easy. Imagining the application of the "design" in the classroom is exciting to me and, even if it wouldn't result in aligning with my "assessment" and "results," I would anticipate an engaged group of students motivated by the work. (Perhaps I'm being naive.) Also, Professor Hanley asks, "Is there a better way to play around with 'backward design'"? Out of a conversation together, addressing all of my issues (assuming other students have the same concerns), we might be able to get clear on what other ways we can create "backward design," by first making certain that the work we've produced does in fact fit into the pedagogical approach.

Remaking the University

I haven't spent much time combing this site, but I think it's certainly applicable to our lives and paths: http://utotherescue.blogspot.com/

I learn, you learn, we all learn with iLearn?

(apologies for posting this a bit late - computer problems and lack of computer access on a trip to New York prevented me from posting sooner, so without further ado...)

As I mentioned in class, what seems to be one of the main issues regarding my experience of iLearn is in its lack of aliveness I associate with the classroom experience. There is a deadness or a less dramatic sterility to communicating with other classmates and the teacher in an online forum, which only allows monologue entires that may or may not be acknowledged, or even read, in the disconnected and less urgent discussion forum that is iLearn. What I'm talking about is hard to argue for, since it is a discussion about the feeling I get when working in the iLearn universe, so it's hard to get specific about what this problem is. Is it unique only to my experience of iLearn as a specific type of person? It's arguable that I'm the type of student who savors interaction in live dialogue, who loves to feel the impact of a spontaneous instant response and likes to leave some of the same impact when sharing my own opinion. iLearn lacks this quality that I find in the classroom. Although this could be a complaint resulting from the specific type of person that I am, there is something to be said for the potential power of the academic atmosphere and that iLearn is an addition that does not enhance such qualities, but merely becomes a inessential supplement.

What I've noticed about iLearn is that the "conversations" professors have with their students is one that creates the tool as unapproachable, potentially useless, unnecessary, scary, etc. This, I believe, is the first problem in implementing more use of CMS. An embracing creativity is required by professors to make iLearn a matter of fact in the learning environment. As it stands, the problem becomes more about the people who are the access points to the tool, rather than the tool itself. I have had one professor who has used iLearn consistently, and in multiple capacities, in all my time at SFSU. The majority of my professors either don't acknowledge its existence, talk about it as if it were an "alien" technology, and maybe post one or two things to the site, but not enough to keep students using and checking it regularly.

But assuming a CMS like iLearn was used extensively in our school system, it must be acknowledged that it is merely the immature beginnings of what could potentially completely transform our classroom experience and our experience of school in total. I consider it a test. One of the first attempts, albeit a feeble one, to use technology to transform yet another societal structure.

claSSRoom <> mooRSSalc

An RSS exercise for the classroom that could prove affective would be the following:Each student is assigned particular excerpts of a work studied in class. As an example, let's use The Great Gatsby.

The particular excerpts picked by the teacher should include certain historical references - descriptions of flappers, a type of industry of the time or real historical events (wars, elections, etc).

The basic version of the exercise would have the student creating a blog for the piece, having the blog roll listing websites that have been researched and pertain directly to the content the student has gleaned from the excerpt.

Part of the grading for an assignment like this would depend on the content pulled - how thoroughly has the student combed the work for concepts, ideas, references that allow them to add RSS feeds to his/her blog roll.

Another measurement of success for the assignment would be what RSS feeds have been added, adding a layer to the assignment which requires the student to spend some time finding the legitimate websites that apply and being able to write a separate blog entry arguing for the RSS feeds he/she has found. This will add an element that challenges the student to question the sources while researching online.

Furthermore, the assignment could become an interactive one for group work. The students have to find legitimate websites/RSS feeds that connect the excerpts to those of other students. In this way, themes might emerge that can be found throughout the novel. Are there websites that address two different topics that are related? How are they related on the website? How are they related on the novel? What do these relationships tell us?

The Digital Humanities Manifesto 2.0 & "open source" Academia

I already mentioned this in class, but the most interesting concept that I gleaned from The Digital Humanities Manifesto 2.0 is captured in the phrase: "The digital is the realm of the open source, open resources. Anything that attempts to close this space should be recognized for what it is: the enemy."

While the ending sentiment is rather dramatic, since I believe it should not be a matter of avoiding what is wrong (the "wrong" being in this case the "enemy" proponents of the "closed source space"), but instead it's about focusing on creating something that we do want or that we do believe is effective, I do believe in a conversation or context for academia that includes a freeing up of all the tools needed to learn and teach - tools both technologically based and otherwise.

Working towards a goal of academia supported within a universe of availability, although potentially idealistic, must be a step in the right direction. Education, information, learning, evolving - these things can only flourish most effectively and profoundly within a world of limitless generosity.

So, while this concept of "open source" might be more closely associated with the internet and its universe, and maybe more likely to occur there, since it is a universe that is much less controlled in a lot of ways than the reality we find ourselves in everyday, how powerful is the realization that this could spill over beyond cyberspace and into the space of the teacher, the student, and the academic institution.

What's possible in total "open source" reality?

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